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How to write a comment
In a comment, you are asked to give your opinion and explain it. This could be in response to
something that has happened or on the views expressed in a newspaper article, discussion etc.
Dos • Plan the structure of your comment to include the following parts.
• Introduction:
- State which topic / question you will write about by referring to the
task.
- Try to get your reader’s attention by starting in an interesting way.
• Main part:
- Identify and refer to the arguments put forward in the text.
- Clearly state your own opinion on the topic.
- Weigh up and reply to arguments that do not support your point of
view.
- Include evidence to support / refute arguments (expert opinions;
statistics etc.).
- Base your arguments on facts and put them forward coherently and
unemotionally – that is more convincing.
• Conclusion:
- Sum up your arguments.
- Come to a logical conclusion about the topic / question stating your
opinion.
• Organize your ideas coherently:
- Organize your ideas into paragraphs.
- Link your ideas / paragraphs with connectives.
• Use formal language
- Use connectives (in addition, finally, moreover, however, etc.).
- Try to avoid using “I” too frequently. There are many other ways of
expressing your opinion.
Don’ts • Don’t start writing before you have planned your answer and know what
conclusion you will come to.
• Don’t just state arguments / opinions without supporting them.
• Don’t use informal language, e.g. short forms (don’t, can’t, etc.), colloquial
language (kids, gonna, etc.) or slang.
Language Referring to the topic / question in the introduction:
Support • This comment / answer will discuss / consider / argue…
• The problem / issue to be discussed in this comment is…
• The text / article / story / author … raises the question of / introduces the problem
of…, which will be discussed in this comment.
Identifying and referring to arguments for the main part:
• The main problem / issue / question that is touched upon in this article is…
• The author states / argues / claims / maintains / supports the idea / puts forward
the argument / denies the fact / contradicts the opinion that…
Weighing up and countering arguments:
• Taking into account what has been said so far, I…
• Having considered the different arguments, I … / Considering the fact that…
• On the one hand …, on the other hand…
• Whereas girls generally like to use the internet to keep in touch with friends, boys
prefer to use it to play computer games. / In contrast to A, B…
• Looking at the problem from A’s side, you have to admit that…
• Another important point / factor / argument to consider is…
• Supporters / Opponents of … argue / might argue that…
• Others claim / assert that…
• While there is no doubt / question that …, … must also be considered / mentioned.
• It must also be taken into consideration that…
Coming to a conclusion:
• All in all, … / In conclusion, …
• To conclude, … / To sum up, …
Source: Camden Town Advanced: Young People. A Guide to Text Analysis, Diesterweg, 2011, p. 84f.