Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while others think that

watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both views and
give your own opinion.
1. Introduce
- Hello everyone. I’m … from group 2. I’m glad to be here with you
today. Now let’s get started with our topic today, which is “ Some
people think watching TV is bad for children, while others think
that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children.” We
will discuss this problem and give our own opinion.
- There are 4 main points we want to tell you: Introduce,
Disadvantages of watching TV for children, Some beneficial
effects on children by watching TV and Conclusion.
- After our presentation, we hope you guys will have both views
about this problem.

2. Body
- Disadvantages: On the one hand, the consequences of watching
TV for long periods of time can be deleterious for children.
● Exposure to vices: You may also not always be able to
control what your kid watches on the TV.
Sex, crime, and violence are frequently depicted on
television and may have negative effects on impressionable
children (and adults). Kids who see violent acts are more
likely to display aggressive or violent behavior and also to
believe that the world is a scary place and that something
bad is going to happen to them. Ongoing studies have shown
a lasting correlation between watching violence on television
and aggression that begins in childhood and continues into
adulthood. Viewers sometimes imitate violent, criminal,
sexual, or other risky behavior they see on television... and
end up in trouble, in jail, or in a hospital as a result.

● Impacts social development:

Kids who watch a lot of TV do not have time to play or
socialize. Less or no interaction with peers can affect their
social development. The major disadvantage of kids’
watching TV is delayed speech. Kids watching television
 could not pick up language soon. While language
development and speech is influenced by many reasons from
genetic factors to lack of attention and conversation with the
kids, watching television is one of the major reasons.
Besides, there is a hidden reason behind the delayed speech
with watching television. If you and your kid watch
television, you obviously have lesser or reduced
communication or interaction with the kid.
You may argue that the TV actually ‘talks’ to your kid, yet,
the kids are attracted by the images, videos, movements and
colors rather than what is spoken.

● Obesity:
- Research has linked TV time to obesity. Addiction to
TV shows reduces the amount of physical activity in
children. Sometimes, they refuse to do anything else
but watch TV all day and eat more snacks. And they
do not snack on vegetables and fruits. It is mostly
fried items and aerated drinks. This causes obesity.
● Affects EQ and

- Currently, the development of EQ in young children is concerned by

parents. However, watching too much TV will have bad effects on
children.When children watch TV, children only absorb in a one-way,
without communication and feedback. Therefore, children will not be
able to accurately judge the value and scale of the event. If children do
not have an accurate understanding of themselves and do not
communicate well with others, they cannot have a high EQ. Also, TV
gives children the ability to explore, discover. Young children spend most
of their time playing with objects in the house. Play is how children
develop an awareness of their surroundings. This is also a way for
children to grow up. Just sitting and watching TV is how children
passively accept information, without the brain's process of analysis and
thinking. Over time, children will reduce their ability to think, create,
explore, and discover.
● Sleep is adversely affected
 If children watch TV before going to bed, theychildren will
become extremely excited, the brain cannot rest and calm down.
This will interfere with theirhe child's sleep, making it impossible
for themthe child to fall asleep and they are more prone to
nightmares after sleeping. Therefore, when children wake up in the
morning, they will be exhausted.
● Affects the development of language skills
Watching too much TV interferes with children's language and social skills
development. Because watching TV is just a one-way process of receiving
information, there is a lack of communication and exchange. Parents should pay
attention to creating an environment of communication and interaction between
children and people instead of just letting them watch TV.
- Advantages: On the other hand, if children know how to adjust the
time and the programs they watch, TV will give them a widehuge
variety of benefits.
● Increase imagination through watching TV: Thanks to
animations, pictures, and sounds of TV programs, there is an
increase in searching creative production, which helps to
inspire a lot. For example, advertising programs promote the
brain and intelligence of children in order to develop
creation.
● To educate: Watching educational TV programmes gives
children the opportunity to widen their horizons and enrich
their knowledge of the world they live in. Planet Earth and
Discovery Channel are interesting examples worth seeing for
everyone, especially children. The programs not only take
viewers into unknown natural habitats which are home to
various plants and animals, but also educate them about the
importance of preserving the wonders of the Earth. In
addition, it also provides knowledge about other cultures,
other limitless knowledge of almost every aspect of life that
children may never see in their real life.

● Positively influence:

Children can be influenced by people they see on television,

especially other kids. Obviously, this can have a negative
 result, but it can be positive too. Lately, kids’ TV shows
have begun promoting some positive agendas such as
healthy living and environmental awareness. As kids see
their favorite characters making positive choices, they will
be influenced in a good way. Parents can also point out
positive traits that characters display and thereby spark
valuable family discussions.

Media truly can have a positive effect on children, but it is

up to the parents, caregivers and educators in their lives to
ensure that kids’s viewing experiences are enriching and not
damaging.

● Watching TV can help children relax: Television is a

source of entertainment that is affordable. Today, movies,
drama, comedy & music are all available at home. In free
time, watching TV is good which may freshen your mood by
watching the show you like as it is a good and effective way
of advertising product or information.
For instance, children might follow game shows such as
“The Voice Kid” which features amazing kids and their
singing talents. They can sing along with the contestants and
have a great time after school. There are many cartoon
channels which have unique animation, funny sound and
content that can make them laugh and forget about their
stressfulour activities for a while.

3. Conclusion
To sum up, although some people think watching TV is bad for
children, we believe that it will be very beneficial for them if older
people care about them and guide them to watch consistent programs
or TV shows.Thanks for listening. Do you have any questions?

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