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Source-based questions

❖ Sources are grouped around a key question.

❖ The context of the sources will be provided, which means that you can use the sources to
answer the questions.
❖ Contextualisation includes the author or creator of the source, the title of the publication in
which the source appeared, and the date and place of publication.
❖ You will have the information to enable you to discuss the reliability or usefulness of each
source.
❖ All persons in cartoons or photographs will be identified.
❖ Each source will be a single source; no sources will be combined into a composite source.
❖ A source-based question test insight and comprehension, for this, you need to know and
understand the background in order for you to be able to interpret sources appropriately.
Use the Historical evidence you have learnt.

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Assessment of Source-based questions

Mark Allocation
(2 x 1) = (2) Write 2 short responses from Response 1 …. ✓
the source (Level 1) Response 2 …. ✓

(4 x 1) = (4) Write 4 short responses from Response 1 …. ✓

the source (Level 1) Response 2 …. ✓
Response 3 …. ✓
Response 4 …. ✓
(1 x 2) = (2) Write 1 complex response Response 1 …. ✓✓
(e.g., explanation/
interpretation)
(2 x 2) = (4) Write 2 complex responses Response 1 …. ✓✓
(e.g., explanation/ Response 2 …. ✓✓
interpretation)

Keep in mind that the following skills will be assessed when you answer a source-based question:
• Demonstrate thorough knowledge and understanding of the topic.
• Extract the correct information from sources.
• Interpret information from sources.
• Identify and compare different perspectives within sources and between sources.
• Explain the different perspectives within the sources in the context of the period studied.
• Draw conclusions about the reliability and usefulness of sources.
• Synthesise information from a range of sources.

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Source-analysis – Level 3

•What makes a source reliable?

• “… the source is based on factual content, written by an expert.”
• “… the person does not choose sides; he/she discusses both sides of the matter.”
• “… dates correspond with the events.”
• “… the person only gives an account of how people experienced it.”
Reliable • “… it corresponds with other sources.”
•What makes a source unreliable?
Reliability evaluates • “… the narrator is subjective/biased/chooses sides.”
whether a source is • “… the person becomes emotional.” (Provide examples from the source)
trustworthy. • “… the person is promoting his/her own case/cause.”
• “… the person provides his/her own opinion.

•What makes a source useful?

•Ask: Can I use this source for this particular topic?”
•Relevance: Source is directly relevant to the topic in question.
•Credibility and reliabilityof the source.
•Source provides in-depth and high quality information that goes beyond surface level details.
Usefulness •Source offer multiple perspectives in order to give a reader comprehensive understanding on
the topic.
the source can be used •Source is consistent with other sources.
to obtain specific
information.

•Source provides a one-sided view

•Source contains bias
•Facts a deliberately ommited.
•Source contains propaganda.
•Source contains factual errors or misrepresentations od
Limitation

•You are also expected to draw comparisons between sources, for example: “What is the
difference between the content of source A and source B?” Formulate your answer as follows:
• “Source A discusses the positive attributes of capitalism, but source B is negative towards
capitalism.”
• If the question counts (2 x 2) = (4) you must name another difference and not expand on the
first one.
Comparison of •If the question is about similarities, you should begin your answer with: “In both sources ...” A
typical question is: “How does source A support or confirm the content of source B?”
sources •Alternatively, you can answer as follows: "Source A states ... Source B confirms this by stating ..."

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Paragraph Questions

• Each source-based question ends with a paragraph question for which you will need to use
the sources in your answer. These types of questions usually count for 8 marks, and it is
important to properly master the skills to answer it.
• The paragraph question tests whether you understand the sources and can place it in a
historical context.
• The question always remains the focus of your answer.
Follow the steps below to write your paragraph.
1. In the first sentence you will rewrite the question as a statement. Then only use
evidence from the sources that relate to that statement and question. Do not quote
the sources but rewrite the evidence from the sources in your own words.
2. Refer to the sources, for example “Source 1A states that …” (prove the source in
your own words) “... and the evidence is clear that ...”
3. Read the question properly and make sure whether it asks you to use all the sources
or whether you should use only relevant sources and whether you also have to
apply your own knowledge. If you do not perform the task in this manner you will
lose marks.
4. Do not write a whole page if the task requires a paragraph. You do not need to
count the number of words or lines, even though the question states 8 or 10 lines,
but try not to write more than 15 lines. If you do, you run the risk of being penalised.

The table below is an example of the assessment rubric for paragraphs:

LEVEL MARKS
1 • Uses elementary evidence, e.g.: shows little or no grasp of how ... question.
0–2
• Partial use of evidence to write a paragraph or incapable of writing a paragraph on the topic.
2 • Evidence is mostly relevant or relates to a great extent.
3–5
• Uses evidence in a basic manner.
3 • Uses relevant evidence with a thorough understanding of the topic and how ... question.
6–8
• Uses evidence effectively in an organised paragraph.

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Answering source-based questions

KEYQUESTION: HOW DID THE COLD WAR SHAPE INTERNATIONAL RELATIONS
AFTER THE SECOND WORLD WAR?

Study the sources (1A – 1D) and answer the questions that follow.
Use your OWN words unless you are asked to quote.

1.1 SOURCE 1A: The consequences of the Cold War.

The Cold War shaped our times. The West created institutions such as the European
Economic Community (since 1993 the European Union) and NATO. Both West and East
suffered the consequences of pouring far more money into the military than might
otherwise have been the case.

Soviet science and technology were overwhelmingly designed to support a vast military
machine, the sheer cost of which ultimately sank the country. Western science and
technology were often driven by the need to maintain an edge over the Soviet Union,
particularly after the Soviets demonstrated their own prowess with Sputnik, the first
artificial satellite, in 1957.

The computers which dominate our world exist because they were needed to fight the
Cold War. The missiles created for the Cold War put men into space and revolutionised
our world by launching satellites of various kinds. Even the terrorism which currently
bedevils international harmony and co-operation can be traced back to tactics each side
adopted to weaken the other during the Cold War.

(Source: The Cold War – Threat, Paranoia and Oppression, From the Iron Curtain, Carlton, 2019)

1.1.1 How, according to the source, was the world divided during the
Cold War? (1 x 1) = (1)
• West and East ✓

1.1.2 List TWO institutions the West created to support its fight against communism.
(2 x 1) = (2)
• The European Economic Community ✓
• NATO ✓
1.1.3 Identify the first artificial satellite. (1 x 1) = (1)

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• Sputnik ✓
1.1.4 Using the source and your knowledge, what were the consequences of the
Soviet’s efforts to support a vast military machine? (2 x 2) = (4)
• The USSR’s economy suffered immensely. ✓✓
• The USSR could not afford programmes like the USA’s ‘Star Wars’
programme, directly influencing the end of the Cold war. ✓✓

1.1.5 What, according to the source, was the driving force behind western science and
technology during the Cold War? (1 x 1) = (1)
• The need to maintain an edge over the Soviet Union. ✓

1.1.6 Define the Cold War in a historical context. (2 x 1) = (2)

• A state of political hostility between countries characterised by threats,
propaganda, and other measures short of open warfare. ✓
• The state of hostility that existed between the Soviet bloc countries and the
Western powers from 1945 to 1990. ✓

1.1.7 Using examples from the source, explain the statement ‘The Cold War shaped our
times.’ (2 x 2) = (4)
• It led to the creation of the European Economic Community that is the
European Union since 1993 and NATO. ✓✓
• Computers which dominate our world exist because they were needed to
fight the Cold War. ✓✓

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1.2 SOURCE 1B: An excerpt about the arms race from an article by Erin Blakemore, published in
The National Geographic

As an ideological “Iron Curtain” cut the Soviet Union and its satellite states off from the
rest of Europe, the US and USSR engaged in an arms race, pouring trillions of dollars into
accumulating nuclear arsenals and racing to explore space. By 1962, both countries had
missile defences pointed at one another. That year, the Cuban Missile Crisis brought both
countries closer to actual conflict than any other event in the Cold War.

Multiple proxy wars stood in for actual conflict between the United States and the Soviet
Union. The Korean War, Vietnam War, and a number of other armed conflicts, during
which both sides either funded one side of the war or fought directly against a communist
or capitalist force, are all considered Cold War proxies. Both sides also funded revolutions,
insurgencies, and political assassinations in Central America, Africa, Asia, and the Middle
East.

(Source: on.natgeo.com/3ehadFO | Accessed on 5 November 2019)

1.2.1 According to source 1B, what cut the Soviet Union and its satellite states off from
the rest of Europe? (1 x 1) = (1)
• The Iron Curtain ✓

1.2.2 Quote a sentence from source 1B that explains how the proxy wars were handled
during the Cold War. (1 x 1) = (1)
• The Korean War, Vietnam War, and a number of other armed conflicts, during
which both sides either funded one side of the war or fought directly against
a communist or capitalist force, are all considered Cold War proxies.’ ✓

1.2.3 Critically discuss the role of the Cuban Missile Crisis in the Cold War.
(2 x 2) = (4)
• In 1962, the Cuban Missile Crisis brought the USSR and the USA closer to
actual conflict than any other event in the Cold War.✓✓
• The USSR and the USA realised that they could not afford to be at war;
started to communicate and ban nuclear weapons. ✓✓

1.2.4 How does source 1B supports the information in source 1A? (2 x 2) = (4)
• Both sources are about divided societies between two different ideologies.✓✓
• Both sources refer to the use of missiles and the exploring of space. ✓✓

1.2.5. Comment on why source 1B can be considered useful for gathering information
regarding the Cold War conflicts. (2 x 2) = (4)

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The source is useful because:

• It mentions the Cuban Missile Crisis as an event that brought the USA and
USSR nearer to actual conflict.✓✓
• It talks about Multiple proxy wars between the USA and the USSR (Korean
War and Vietnam War). ✓✓

(14)

SOURCE 1C: A description of the Cold War

The Cold War began as a conflict between the Soviet Union on one side and the USA and
Western Europe on the other. Then it gradually spread all over the world. The Cold War
was a time of polarisation of the world determined by the competing superpowers (the
USA and the USSR), political tensions, ideological rivalry, arms race, intelligence struggle,
psychological war, competition for influences in the Third World and confrontation shifted
onto peripheral areas. For the first time in history, nobody could be sure to win or to
merely survive the cold war. Thus, it could not be decided by means of a military conflict.
The Cold War was, however, an actual and at times overly fierce war, even though the
superpowers avoided direct military confrontation and eventually did not use their
nuclear weapons.

(Source: http://bit.ly/2H4dCXb. Accessed on 20 January 2020.)

1.3.1 List from source 1C the properties of the Cold War to prove that the
Cold War ‘gradually spread all over the world’. (2 x 1) = (2)
• Competition for influence in the Third World. ✓
• The confrontation shifted onto peripheral areas. ✓

1.3.2 Use your knowledge and explain what is meant by ideological rivalry between the
USA and the USSR. (2 x 1) = (2)
• During the Cold War, the United States was based upon capitalism/
democracy while the Soviet Union was based upon communism/ dictatorship.
✓
• A war of ideas is a clash or disagreement of opposing ideals, ideologies, or
concepts through which nations or groups use strategic influence to promote
their interests abroad. ✓
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1.3 SOURCE 1D: A British political cartoon by Leslie Gilbert Illingworth. It depicts Nikita Khrushchev
and John F. Kennedy embroiled in an arm-wrestling competition. This cartoon was published
in October 1962, right after the Cuban Missile Crisis ended (much to the relief of people
worldwide). It was created to show that tensions still exist between the Soviet Union and the
United States, and how fragile the relationship between the two world powers really was.

(Source: https://bit.ly/3xTxcyz | Accessed on 7 December 2020)

1.4.1 From which country is the cartoonist? (1 x 1) = (1)

• Britain. ✓

1.4.2 Name the countries the two leaders were from. (2 x 1) = (2)
• The USSR. ✓ United States. ✓

1.4.3 What is the message portrayed by this cartoon? (1 x 2) = (2)

• It explains the arms race; competition between the superpowers,
regarding weapons. ✓✓

1.4.4 Explain why this cartoon can be considered biased. (2 x 2) = (4)

• It is a British cartoonist that choose sides. ✓✓
• It is the cartoonist’s opinion, showing the USSR sweating more.✓✓

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1.5 Use the sources and your knowledge and write a paragraph of ±15 lines in which you
critically discuss the impact of the Cold War on international relations. (8)

The Cold War was a conflict between the USA and USSR that escalated. Period 1914 to 1991
is marked by competition between capitalist and communist states. Both sides built military
alliances. NATO and Warsaw Pact (source 1A). Both West and East suffered the
consequences of pouring far more money into the military than might otherwise have been
the case (Sank the USSR) (source 1A).The computers which dominate our world exist
because they were needed to fight the Cold War (source 1A). The missiles created for the
Cold War put men into space and revolutionized our world by launching satellites of various
kinds (source 1A and 1C). Even the terrorism which currently bedevils international harmony
and co-operation can be traced back to tactics each side adopted to weaken the other during
the Cold War (source 1A). Multiple proxy wars stood in for actual conflict between the
United States and the Soviet Union (The Korean War, Vietnam War) (source 1B) .Both sides
also funded revolutions, insurgencies, and political assassinations in Central America, Africa,
Asia, and the Middle East (sources 1B and 1C). The impact of the Cold war was significant; it
changed the world both positively and negatively.
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Essay Questions

• An essay consists of various paragraphs and is answered using full sentences. No

abbreviations are allowed, except in the case of SA (South Africa) or ANC (African National
Congress). In such cases the name is written out once with the abbreviation in brackets. In
subsequent use only the abbreviation should be used. Official abbreviations such as i.e. (in
other words) is never used in an essay. “Et cetera” is never used in an answer – this includes
source-based questions.
• The question always remains the focus of your answer.
• Analyse the question and use your question throughout when you plan your answer.
• An essay is usually around three pages. The number of paragraphs is not prescriptive, but all
essays must begin with an introduction and end with a conclusion.
• One paragraph cannot take up an entire page. Try to keep your paragraphs under
approximately 15 lines.
• All sentences must convey meaning. It is always better to keep a sentence short, rather than
long and cumbersome.
• Read your essay carefully and ensure that it is intelligible to the examiner. You are the one
who have to earn the marks.
• Use the PEEL structure.

P Point: The candidate introduces the essay by taking a line of argument/making a major
point. Each paragraph should include a point that sustains the major point (line of
argument) that was made in the introduction.
E Explanation: The candidate should explain in more detail what the main point is about and
how it relates to the question posed (line of argument).
E Example: The candidates should answer the question by selecting content that is relevant
to the line of argument. Relevant examples should be given to sustain the line of
argument.
L Link: Candidates should ensure that the line of argument is sustained throughout the
essay and is written coherently.

Planning your essay

In History, we do not use headings in our essays, and even though planning is an excellent aid to
answering essays, you only receive marks for the final essay. The table below is an example you can
use to plan your essay:

Most important test: What? Who? When? Where?

Am I focusing on the question? Standpoint
Introductory paragraph What are you going to prove and how are
you going to prove it?

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Body: Paragraph 1 Core idea

Expand idea. Explain and give examples.
Return to the question. The last sentence links to your standpoint.
Body: Paragraph 2 Core idea
Expand idea. Explain and give examples.
Return to the question. The last sentence links to your standpoint.
Conclusion: Repeat standpoint.
Inference Summary.

Structure of the essay

Essays must have a formal structure that includes an introduction which states the point of view or the
explanation; a main body, which elaborates on the argument; and a conclusion. You will receive credit for
this structure. You will be asked to discuss, explain or evaluate the accuracy of a statement. Never express
your own opinion. There are clear instructions on the structure of an essay question in the learner's book.

The first paragraph of an essay is extremely important. The introduction proves whether or not you
understand the question. It addresses the question and places events in context. It explains the who, what,
when, and where relating to the question. It is also in the introduction where a standpoint is expressed with
regards to the question. Briefly explain the main points of how you are going to prove this standpoint. (It can
include the main ideas of your next paragraphs).

The next paragraph contains the body of your essay. Each paragraph consists of ONE main idea and an
expansion (explanation), a recap of your standpoint, and the question.

The last paragraph contains no new facts but is a conclusion and summary. It is also an incredibly important
part of your essay and once again proves whether you understood the question and answered it. It is the
conclusion.

Use this frame to help you structure your response to the essay question.

Question: (Write the Essay Question in the space below)

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o Underline the Key ‘instruction’ words?
o Any terms/names/dates need explaining.
Introduction: (Write your introduction below)
In your introduction, include the following:
Context:
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Argument:
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Signpost sentence:
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Paragraph 1: PEEL Structure
Point: First sentence of the paragraph
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Explanation:
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Evidence/Examples:
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Check your argument
Link: Link to the Line of argument
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Conclusion
Summarise the main argument of the essay.
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Assessment of essay questions

Keep in mind that the following skills will be assessed when you write an essay:
• Demonstrate thorough knowledge and understanding of the topic.
• Use relevant information to answer the question.
• Plan and structure an essay.
• Use evidence to support an argument.
• Develop and sustain an independent and well-balanced argument.
• Write logically, coherently, and chronologically.

The following rubric is used when marking essays. Study this rubric and ensure you meet the requirements
as explained.

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PRESENTATION
LEVEL 7
Well-planned and LEVEL 5
LEVEL 3
structured essay. Good LEVEL 6 Well-planned and
LEVEL 4 Shows some evidence of LEVEL 2
synthesis of information. Well-planned and structured essay.
Structured and planned a structured and Attempts to structure an
CONTENT Developed a well- structured essay. Developed a clear LEVEL 1
argument Evidence used planned argument. answer. Largely
balanced and Relevant line of argument. Conclusion Little or no attempt to
to support argument. Attempts to sustain a descriptive, or some
independent line of argument. Evidence drawn from evidence. structure the argument.
Conclusion reached line of argument. attempt at developing
argument with the use used to defend the Independent conclusion.
based on evidence. Conclusion not clearly an argument.
of evidence. Sustained argument. Evidence used to
supported by evidence.
and defended the support the conclusion.
argument throughout.

LEVEL 7
Question has been fully answered. Content
selection fully relevant to the line of 47 – 50 43 – 46
argument.

LEVEL 6
Question has been answered. Content 43 – 46 40 – 42 38 – 39
selection relevant to the line of argument.

LEVEL 5
Question answered to a great extent. 38 – 39 36 – 37 34 – 35
Content adequately covered and relevant.

LEVEL 4
Question is recognisable in answer. Some 30 – 33 28 – 29 26 – 27
omissions or irrelevant content selection.

LEVEL 3
Content selection relates to the question,
but does not answer it, or does not always 26 – 27 24 – 25 20 – 23
relate to the question. Omissions in
coverage.

LEVEL 2
Question inadequately answered. Sparse 20 – 23 18 – 19 15 – 17
content.

LEVEL 1
Question inadequately answered. 14 – 17 0 – 13
Inadequate or irrelevant content.

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Essay example
The following essay aims to solely act as a guideline for essay writing. Please note that China will not
be examined this year (2024) and you should use this essay as a guideline for what is considered a
good essay.

QUESTION:
To what extent was China’s transformation to a communist state an extension of the Cold War?
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Step 1: Analyse the question and understand its requirements.

Step 2: Write down the important factors that need to be unpacked in your essay.
Step 3: Plan and organize the main points you will include in your essay.
You can use the table above to help you plan your answer.

Read the essay below and analyse the use of the PEEL structure and how it is organised.

In 1949, when China became the second important country in the world to adopt communism
(Marxism), it seemed as though the communist side had gained a significant advantage in the Cold
War. The Soviet Union welcomed the People’s Republic of China (PRC) as an ally, and the two
countries signed a friendship treaty. The Americans viewed the communist victory as part of a
conspiracy under the leadership of the Soviet Union. China’s transition to a communist state was to
a large extent an expansion of the Cold War. This statement will be substantiated by investigating the
relationship between Russia and China as well as the relationship between the USA and China.

The Cold War was characterised by an intense ideological struggle between the United States and
the Soviet Union. The ideological divide between capitalism and communism had a profound impact
on the global political landscape. China's adoption of communism under the leadership of the Chinese
Communist Party (CCP) can be seen as a response to this ideological contest (point). China's
ideological alignment with communism was not merely a theoretical stance but a pragmatic response
to the changing international dynamics. The CCP, led by Mao Zedong, believed that communism
offered a viable alternative to the socio-economic challenges facing China, such as poverty,
inequality, and foreign exploitation. This ideological commitment fuelled the Chinese Revolution, as
the CCP sought to establish a new social order that was congruent with the principles of Marxism-
Leninism (explain). The Chinese Civil War (1927-1949) was a pivotal phase in China's communist
transformation. The CCP, in alliance with the Soviet Union, fought against the Nationalist forces led
by Chiang Kai-shek. The support from the Soviet Union, motivated by the broader Cold War context,
played a crucial role in the CCP's ultimate victory in 1949. The establishment of the People's Republic
of China (PRC) marked the triumph of communism and underscored the alignment of China with the

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Soviet bloc during the Cold War (example). Thus, China's ideological shift toward communism was
closely tied to the ideological struggle of the Cold War. The CCP's adoption of Marxist-Leninist
principles and its alignment with the Soviet Union reflected a broader global pattern of nations
choosing sides in the ideological contest between communism and capitalism (link).

Beyond ideology, China's transformation to a communist state can also be understood in the context
of strategic considerations arising from the Cold War. The geopolitical landscape of the time pushed
China towards aligning with the communist bloc for both security and diplomatic reasons (point). As
the Cold War intensified, geopolitical alliances became instrumental in shaping the global balance of
power. The Chinese leadership, perceiving the need for protection against external threats and
regional stability, strategically aligned with the Soviet Union and other communist nations. This
alignment was not solely based on ideological affinity but also on the pragmatic need for security in
a world increasingly divided along Cold War lines (explain). The Sino-Soviet Treaty of Friendship,
Alliance, and Mutual Assistance signed in 1950 exemplifies the strategic considerations that
influenced China's alignment with the communist bloc. The treaty solidified the alliance between
China and the Soviet Union, providing a framework for mutual defence against common adversaries.
This strategic move was driven by a shared interest in countering the influence of the United States
and its allies in the Asia-Pacific region (example). In essence, China's transformation into a communist
state was not only a response to ideological imperatives but also a strategic manoeuvre shaped by
the geopolitical realities of the Cold War. The alignment with the communist bloc was a calculated
move to enhance China's security and influence in a world divided between the two superpowers
(link).

Following the severance of relations between China and the USSR due to a number of reasons,
relations between China and the West began to improve (point). In the 1970s, China developed closer
ties with the USA. In 1972, Nixon became the first American president to visit China. Trade between
the two countries improved. By the late sixties, both China and the USA had become increasingly
concerned about the threat the aggressive Soviet Union posed to them (explain). An example of this
took place in Czechoslovakia when Soviet troops and tanks acted violently against liberalisation
efforts. The Brezhnev Doctrine declared that the Soviet Union and its allies would violently intervene
in any country that wished to distance itself from the socialist policy. The Chinese leaders were
concerned that the Soviet Union would act violently towards them in future. China and the USA were
also concerned about the USSR’s nuclear capability as it was more or less equal to that of the USA
(example). China’s communist transformation was not a static outcome but rather a response to
changing global dynamics, with shifts in alliances reflecting the fluid nature of the Cold War
environment (link).

In conclusion, China's transformation into a communist state was intricately connected to the
dynamics of the Cold War. The ideological struggle between communism and capitalism, coupled
with strategic considerations driven by geopolitical realities, played pivotal roles in shaping China's
political trajectory. The alignment with the communist bloc, particularly the Soviet Union, during the
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early years of the Cold War underscored the complex interplay of ideology and strategy in China's
communist transformation.

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