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Mechanism description (intro, operation and conclusion) | PDF
introduction,
operation and
conclusion
introduction
Writing the Introduction
Define the product
The Staedtler Noris 120 HB pencil is a tool used for
wri:ng or drawing. It creates marks by physical abrasion of
graphite on paper or other surfaces. These marks can be
removed using an eraser. This descrip:on is intended to
explain to the end user the structure and opera:ng
principle of the Staedtler Noris 120.
Say how it works
The Staedtler Noris 120 HB pencil is a tool used for wri:ng
or drawing. It creates marks by physical abrasion of
graphite on paper or other surfaces. These marks can be
removed using an eraser. This descrip:on is intended to
explain to the end user the structure and opera:ng
principle of the Staedtler Noris 120.
State the intended audience
The Staedtler Noris 120 HB pencil is a tool used for wri:ng
or drawing. It creates marks by physical abrasion of graphite
on paper or other surfaces. These marks can be removed
using an eraser. This descrip:on is intended to explain to
the end user the structure and opera:ng principle of the
Staedtler Noris 120.
General Description
Give the overall shape
The main body of the pencil is a hexagonal prism with a yellow and black
painted exterior. There is a graphite cylinder running through the center of the
body. One end of the body tapers to a point in order to expose the graphite.
At the other end, there is an eraser which is aGached to the body by a casing.
The pencil is made from a combina:on of wood, graphite, aluminum and rubber.
Figure 1 shows the four parts of the pencil. The pencil has an overall length of
190.5 millimeters and a width of 7 millimeters. The major parts of the Staedtler
Noris 120 HB are:
•the main body
•the graphite cylinder
•the casing
•the eraser
State the materials used
The main body of the pencil is a hexagonal prism with a yellow and black
painted exterior. There is a graphite cylinder running through the center of the
body. One end of the body tapers to a point in order to expose the graphite. At
the other end, there is an eraser which is aNached to the body by a casing. The
pencil is made from a combina:on of wood, graphite, aluminum and rubber.
Figure 1 shows the four parts of the pencil. The pencil has an overall length of
190.5 millimeters and a width of 7 millimeters. The major parts of the Staedtler
Noris 120 HB are:
•the main body
•the graphite cylinder
•the casing
•the eraser
Give the overall dimensions
The main body of the pencil is a hexagonal prism with a yellow and black
painted exterior. There is a graphite cylinder running through the center of the
body. One end of the body tapers to a point in order to expose the graphite. At
the other end, there is an eraser which is aNached to the body by a casing. The
pencil is made from a combina:on of wood, graphite, aluminum and rubber.
Figure 1 shows the four parts of the pencil. The pencil has an overall length of
190.5 millimeters and a width of 7 millimeters. The major parts of the Staedtler
Noris 120 HB are:
•the main body
•the graphite cylinder
•the casing
•the eraser
List the major parts
The main body of the pencil is a hexagonal prism with a yellow and black
painted exterior. There is a graphite cylinder running through the center of the
body. One end of the body tapers to a point in order to expose the graphite. At
the other end, there is an eraser which is aNached to the body by a casing. The
pencil is made from a combina:on of wood, graphite, aluminum and rubber.
Figure 1 shows the four parts of the pencil. The pencil has an overall length of
190.5 millimeters and a width of 7 millimeters. The major parts of the Staedtler
Noris 120 HB are:
•the main body
•the graphite cylinder
•the casing
•the eraser
operation
List the steps
make sure to use sequence
words
First the main body of the pencil is held between the thumb and
the first two fingers with the exposed graphite facing the paper (as
shown in Figure 3, below). Secondly, the exposed graphite is
placed in contact with the paper. Third, the pencil is moved
against the paper. Fourthly, the graphite is abraded (rubbed) by
the paper, causing it to adhere to the paper and leave markings.
and passive voice
First the main body of the pencil is held between the thumb and
the first two fingers with the exposed graphite facing the paper (as
shown in Figure 3, below). Secondly, the exposed graphite is
placed in contact with the paper. Third, the pencil is moved
against the paper. Fourthly, the graphite is abraded (rubbed) by
the paper, causing it to adhere to the paper and leave markings.
conclusion
review the function and
number of parts
The four parts of the Staedtler Noris 120 HB pencil combine to
create a tool which allows the user to write and draw cheaply
and easily. The graphite of the pencil is placed in contact with the
paper and the physical abrasion caused when the pencil is moved
leaves graphite marks on the paper. The advantage of the pencil
over a pen is that it allows the user to remove mistakes they have
made via the eraser. Staedtler Noris 120 HB is available from most
sta:onary stores for a price of around $0.25. For more
informa:on, go to www.staedtler.com.
summarize the operation in
one sentence
The four parts of the Staedtler Noris 120 HB pencil combine to
create a tool which allows the user to write and draw cheaply and
easily. The graphite of the pencil is placed in contact with the
paper and the physical abrasion caused when the pencil is
moved leaves graphite marks on the paper. The advantage of the
pencil over a pen is that it allows the user to remove mistakes they
have made via the eraser. Staedtler Noris 120 HB is available from
most sta:onary stores for a price of around $0.25. For more
informa:on, go to www.staedtler.com.
give the reader some new
information
The four parts of the Staedtler Noris 120 HB pencil combine to
create a tool which allows the user to write and draw cheaply and
easily. The graphite of the pencil is placed in contact with the
paper and the physical abrasion caused when the pencil is moved
leaves graphite marks on the paper. The advantage of the pencil
over a pen is that it allows the user to remove mistakes they
have made via the eraser. Staedtler Noris 120 HB is available
from most sta:onary stores for a price of around $0.25. For
more informa:on, go to www.staedtler.com.
tell the reader where they can
get more info
The four parts of the Staedtler Noris 120 HB pencil combine to
create a tool which allows the user to write and draw cheaply and
easily. The graphite of the pencil is placed in contact with the
paper and the physical abrasion caused when the pencil is moved
leaves graphite marks on the paper. The advantage of the pencil
over a pen is that it allows the user to remove mistakes they have
made via the eraser. Staedtler Noris 120 HB is available from most
sta:onary stores for a price of around $0.25. For more
informa:on, go to www.staedtler.com.
Seagate Backup Plus 500 GB External Hard Drive - Technical Description
Introduction
The Seagate Backup Plus 500 GB External Hard Drive is a device used for storing and
retrieving digital information. It works by recording data by magnetizing a thin layer of
ferromagnetic material.
This description is intended to explain to the end user the structure and operating principle
of the Seagate Backup Plus 500 GB External Hard Drive.
General Description
The Seagate Backup Plus is rectangular in shape and is made from a combination of
stainless steel and black plastic. The overall dimensions of the Backup Plus are:
length - 114mm
width - 75mm
height - 16 mm
Description of Major Components
The Seagate Backup Plus 500 GB External Hard Drive consists of three major
components; a) the main body, b) the hard disk and c) the connector cable.
Main Body
The main body is the component that protects the hard disk. It is rectangular in shape
and has a stainless steel top. The back and sides are made from black plastic. There is a
micro USB 3 port at one end of the body. The body is 114 mm long, 75 mm wide and 12
mm high.
Hard Disk
The hard disk is the component that stores information. It is a polished aluminum circle
located inside the main body. The diameter of the circle is 67 mm and the width is 1.6
mm.
Connector Cable
The connector cable is the component that connects the hard drive to the computer. It
is a copper wire covered in black plastic. There is a Micro USB adaptor at one end and
standard USB adaptor at the other. The length of the cable is 500 mm and the thickness
is 4mm.
Operation
First, the Micro USB 3.0 end of the connector cable is connected to
the hard drive. Second, the standard USB end is connected to the
computer. Third, the hard drive is opened on the computer
desktop. Fourth, files are dragged from their location to the hard
drive. Lastly, the hard drive is ejected from the computer.
Conclusion
The Seagate Backup Plus 500 GB External Hard Drive consists of
three major components; a) the main body, b) the hard disk and c)
the connector cable. These parts combine to allow users to transfer
files and other electronic information easily.
The Hard disk is connected to the computer via the connector cable
snd files are dragged and dropped onto the hard drive before the
hard drive is ejected again. The Seagate Backup Plus is available at
most stationary stores for SR 375.

Mechanism description (intro, operation and conclusion)

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    The Staedtler Noris120 HB pencil is a tool used for wri:ng or drawing. It creates marks by physical abrasion of graphite on paper or other surfaces. These marks can be removed using an eraser. This descrip:on is intended to explain to the end user the structure and opera:ng principle of the Staedtler Noris 120.
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    The Staedtler Noris120 HB pencil is a tool used for wri:ng or drawing. It creates marks by physical abrasion of graphite on paper or other surfaces. These marks can be removed using an eraser. This descrip:on is intended to explain to the end user the structure and opera:ng principle of the Staedtler Noris 120.
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    The Staedtler Noris120 HB pencil is a tool used for wri:ng or drawing. It creates marks by physical abrasion of graphite on paper or other surfaces. These marks can be removed using an eraser. This descrip:on is intended to explain to the end user the structure and opera:ng principle of the Staedtler Noris 120.
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    The main bodyof the pencil is a hexagonal prism with a yellow and black painted exterior. There is a graphite cylinder running through the center of the body. One end of the body tapers to a point in order to expose the graphite. At the other end, there is an eraser which is aGached to the body by a casing. The pencil is made from a combina:on of wood, graphite, aluminum and rubber. Figure 1 shows the four parts of the pencil. The pencil has an overall length of 190.5 millimeters and a width of 7 millimeters. The major parts of the Staedtler Noris 120 HB are: •the main body •the graphite cylinder •the casing •the eraser
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    The main bodyof the pencil is a hexagonal prism with a yellow and black painted exterior. There is a graphite cylinder running through the center of the body. One end of the body tapers to a point in order to expose the graphite. At the other end, there is an eraser which is aNached to the body by a casing. The pencil is made from a combina:on of wood, graphite, aluminum and rubber. Figure 1 shows the four parts of the pencil. The pencil has an overall length of 190.5 millimeters and a width of 7 millimeters. The major parts of the Staedtler Noris 120 HB are: •the main body •the graphite cylinder •the casing •the eraser
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    Give the overalldimensions
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    The main bodyof the pencil is a hexagonal prism with a yellow and black painted exterior. There is a graphite cylinder running through the center of the body. One end of the body tapers to a point in order to expose the graphite. At the other end, there is an eraser which is aNached to the body by a casing. The pencil is made from a combina:on of wood, graphite, aluminum and rubber. Figure 1 shows the four parts of the pencil. The pencil has an overall length of 190.5 millimeters and a width of 7 millimeters. The major parts of the Staedtler Noris 120 HB are: •the main body •the graphite cylinder •the casing •the eraser
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    The main bodyof the pencil is a hexagonal prism with a yellow and black painted exterior. There is a graphite cylinder running through the center of the body. One end of the body tapers to a point in order to expose the graphite. At the other end, there is an eraser which is aNached to the body by a casing. The pencil is made from a combina:on of wood, graphite, aluminum and rubber. Figure 1 shows the four parts of the pencil. The pencil has an overall length of 190.5 millimeters and a width of 7 millimeters. The major parts of the Staedtler Noris 120 HB are: •the main body •the graphite cylinder •the casing •the eraser
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    make sure touse sequence words
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    First the mainbody of the pencil is held between the thumb and the first two fingers with the exposed graphite facing the paper (as shown in Figure 3, below). Secondly, the exposed graphite is placed in contact with the paper. Third, the pencil is moved against the paper. Fourthly, the graphite is abraded (rubbed) by the paper, causing it to adhere to the paper and leave markings.
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    First the mainbody of the pencil is held between the thumb and the first two fingers with the exposed graphite facing the paper (as shown in Figure 3, below). Secondly, the exposed graphite is placed in contact with the paper. Third, the pencil is moved against the paper. Fourthly, the graphite is abraded (rubbed) by the paper, causing it to adhere to the paper and leave markings.
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    review the functionand number of parts
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    The four partsof the Staedtler Noris 120 HB pencil combine to create a tool which allows the user to write and draw cheaply and easily. The graphite of the pencil is placed in contact with the paper and the physical abrasion caused when the pencil is moved leaves graphite marks on the paper. The advantage of the pencil over a pen is that it allows the user to remove mistakes they have made via the eraser. Staedtler Noris 120 HB is available from most sta:onary stores for a price of around $0.25. For more informa:on, go to www.staedtler.com.
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    summarize the operationin one sentence
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    The four partsof the Staedtler Noris 120 HB pencil combine to create a tool which allows the user to write and draw cheaply and easily. The graphite of the pencil is placed in contact with the paper and the physical abrasion caused when the pencil is moved leaves graphite marks on the paper. The advantage of the pencil over a pen is that it allows the user to remove mistakes they have made via the eraser. Staedtler Noris 120 HB is available from most sta:onary stores for a price of around $0.25. For more informa:on, go to www.staedtler.com.
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    give the readersome new information
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    The four partsof the Staedtler Noris 120 HB pencil combine to create a tool which allows the user to write and draw cheaply and easily. The graphite of the pencil is placed in contact with the paper and the physical abrasion caused when the pencil is moved leaves graphite marks on the paper. The advantage of the pencil over a pen is that it allows the user to remove mistakes they have made via the eraser. Staedtler Noris 120 HB is available from most sta:onary stores for a price of around $0.25. For more informa:on, go to www.staedtler.com.
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    tell the readerwhere they can get more info
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    The four partsof the Staedtler Noris 120 HB pencil combine to create a tool which allows the user to write and draw cheaply and easily. The graphite of the pencil is placed in contact with the paper and the physical abrasion caused when the pencil is moved leaves graphite marks on the paper. The advantage of the pencil over a pen is that it allows the user to remove mistakes they have made via the eraser. Staedtler Noris 120 HB is available from most sta:onary stores for a price of around $0.25. For more informa:on, go to www.staedtler.com.
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    Seagate Backup Plus500 GB External Hard Drive - Technical Description Introduction The Seagate Backup Plus 500 GB External Hard Drive is a device used for storing and retrieving digital information. It works by recording data by magnetizing a thin layer of ferromagnetic material. This description is intended to explain to the end user the structure and operating principle of the Seagate Backup Plus 500 GB External Hard Drive. General Description The Seagate Backup Plus is rectangular in shape and is made from a combination of stainless steel and black plastic. The overall dimensions of the Backup Plus are: length - 114mm width - 75mm height - 16 mm
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    Description of MajorComponents The Seagate Backup Plus 500 GB External Hard Drive consists of three major components; a) the main body, b) the hard disk and c) the connector cable. Main Body The main body is the component that protects the hard disk. It is rectangular in shape and has a stainless steel top. The back and sides are made from black plastic. There is a micro USB 3 port at one end of the body. The body is 114 mm long, 75 mm wide and 12 mm high. Hard Disk The hard disk is the component that stores information. It is a polished aluminum circle located inside the main body. The diameter of the circle is 67 mm and the width is 1.6 mm. Connector Cable The connector cable is the component that connects the hard drive to the computer. It is a copper wire covered in black plastic. There is a Micro USB adaptor at one end and standard USB adaptor at the other. The length of the cable is 500 mm and the thickness is 4mm.
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    Operation First, the MicroUSB 3.0 end of the connector cable is connected to the hard drive. Second, the standard USB end is connected to the computer. Third, the hard drive is opened on the computer desktop. Fourth, files are dragged from their location to the hard drive. Lastly, the hard drive is ejected from the computer.
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    Conclusion The Seagate BackupPlus 500 GB External Hard Drive consists of three major components; a) the main body, b) the hard disk and c) the connector cable. These parts combine to allow users to transfer files and other electronic information easily. The Hard disk is connected to the computer via the connector cable snd files are dragged and dropped onto the hard drive before the hard drive is ejected again. The Seagate Backup Plus is available at most stationary stores for SR 375.