Discussion
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Group 6
Group Members
Angga Anggelar (2)
Aisyah Humaira (3)
Luthfia Ramadhani Sareeya Amanda (30)
(12)
Pascal Aryandra (25)
Revalina Nugestya (27)
Definition
Discussion text is writing that discusses
an issue or problem by presenting various
opinions, both pro and con.
Purpose
to present different
perspectives, opinions, or
arguments on a topic, issue, or
question.
Generic Structure
Issue: In this section, the author introduces the issues discussed in
his/her writing.
Arguments pro and contra: This section presents pro and con
arguments from various experts, not the author's opinion. Each
argument includes a main idea and description.
Recommendation or Conclusion: The author can take one point
from the argument given and provide his statement or
recommendation.
Language Features
Thinking verbs Connectives
These verbs describe mental processes or
words or phrases that link ideas,
cognitive actions
sentences, or paragraphs.
Example: However we believe, they can
Example: However we believe, they
also lead to addiction.
can also lead to addiction
Modal verbs Reported speech
Indicate the level of certainty or commitment convey what someone else has said or
to a particular viewpoint. written without quoting them directly.
Example: excessive use of social media might Example: According to researches has
lead to some mental health issue. shown that excessive use of social
Adverbs of manner media
describe how an action is performed, giving
more information about a verb.
Example: measure their lives against the carefully
curated posts of others.
The Negative Consequences of Social Media and Gadget
In this modern era, social media and gadgets have taken over our daily lives,
offering unparalleled convenience, entertainment, and connectivity. However, the
widespread use of these technologies also brings a host of negative consequences
that are increasingly difficult to ignore. Our discussion will delve into the various
bad consequences associated with the excessive use of social media and gadgets.
One of the most pressing issues is addiction and dependency. Social media
platforms and gadgets are designed to capture and hold users’ attention for as long
as possible. Features like endless scrolling, notifications, and instant gratification
through likes and comments contribute to addictive behaviours. This feature is
often involved in apps like tiktok, instagram, twitter, etc. Over time, this
dependency can disrupt our daily life. Some people may find themselves always
checking on their devices even during important tasks, unable to focus on anything
else and drown themselves in their phone.
The impact on mental health is another big concern. According to researchers,
excessive use of social media might lead to some mental health issues for example
anxiety, depression, and loneliness. Social media have a culture of comparison,
where users constantly measure their lives against the carefully curated posts of
others. This can lead to feelings of jealousy and insecurity, as people struggle to
live up to the unrealistic standards portrayed online for example instagram
post/story, tiktok, etc. The pressure of a perfect image can lead to stress and
negative self-esteem.
Anti-social behaviour is becoming more common in our life as face-to-face
interactions decline. As people become more engrossed in their virtual lives, they
often neglect real-world relationships. This can lead to a decrease in real-life social
interactions, as people prefer the comfort and convenience of online
communication over in-person meetings. Over time, this can result in bad social
skills and isolation, as people struggle to connect with other people outside their
gadgets.
The digital world is also filled with risks such as online scams and cyberbullying. Scammers
exploit the anonymity and reach of the internet to deceive users, often targeting the most
vulnerable individuals. These scams can result in significant financial losses and emotional
trauma. Some of these scams can lead to a bigger threat in the future with the example of
online gambling, fake business opportunities, fake stock market, etc.
Cyberbullying is another alarming issue, particularly among younger users. The anonymity
provided by social media platforms allows bullies to harass and intimidate others without
facing immediate consequences, leading to severe psychological harm for the victims,
including anxiety, depression, and in extreme cases, suicidal thoughts.
Misinformation and privacy concerns is such a big issue surrounding social media use. The
rapid spread of false or misleading information online can lead to widespread
misunderstanding and panic. This is particularly dangerous in situations involving public
health or safety, where accurate information is crucial. Additionally, the vast amount of
personal data shared on social media platforms is often poorly protected, making users
vulnerable to privacy breaches. Personal information can be stolen or misused, leading to
identity theft or exploitation.
Physical health problems are increasingly common among those who spend long hours on
their devices. Prolonged gadget use can lead to a variety of physical ailments, including eye
strain, headaches, poor posture, and repetitive strain injuries such as carpal tunnel
syndrome. These issues are compounded by a sedentary lifestyle, which is often associated
with excessive gadget use, increasing the risk of obesity and related health problems. Over
time, these physical issues can lead to chronic conditions that significantly impact quality of
life and lead to further issues in old ages.
The constant use of gadgets is also linked to a decrease in attention span and the ability to
concentrate. With the constant barrage of notifications, messages, and updates, people are
increasingly finding it difficult to focus on tasks that require sustained attention. This decline
in concentration can negatively impact academic performance, work productivity, and the
ability to engage in deep, meaningful thought or creative activities.
There's also a big risk of over spending on social media or gadgets since there are ads that
are specifically designed to interest you in buying it a lot of ads are placed in pop up ads in
websites, apps, and games, this lures you into buying it without really thinking about it.
Application on gadgets like games, can increase someone's cost in various ways especially
with kids who use the internet without parental surveillance they can buy something with
just a click since credit information is stored in your gadget too.
Finally, the influence of social media on children and teens is particularly
concerning. As they are at an impressionable age, exposure to inappropriate
content, cyberbullying, and the pressure to conform to certain online trends can
shape their behaviour and development in negative ways. The impact of these
factors can lead to long-term issues such as poor self-esteem, anxiety, and
unhealthy behaviours that carry into adulthood. For example, the skibidi toilet
trend that Gen Alpha mimic, this trend on certain children shapes their personality
to be feisty, and addicted to it.
In conclusion, while social media and gadgets offer undeniable benefits, their
impact ultimately depends on how they are used. These technologies can be
powerful tools for communication, education, and entertainment when used
positively and in moderation. However we believe, they can also lead to addiction,
mental health issues, and physical problems if used excessively or irresponsibly.
mindful of their habits, making conscious choices to engage with social media and
gadgets in ways that promote well-being, rather than allowing them to become
sources of harm. The key lies in finding a balance and using these tools to enhance
life rather than detract from it.
Conclusion
In conclusion, the characteristics of a
discussion text are the presentation of the
issue, then the pros and cons arguments
related to the issue discussed as well as
suggestions for readers.
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