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Devin Stroope
Mr.Smith
Junior ELA
6 November 2023
Digital Boundaries In Early Childhood
The digital age has brought with it a new type of childhood, one with side effects in children that
are yet to be fully understood. The influence of technology in today’s world is at an all-time high, but
when children are exposed to screens at a young age, it can lead to profound future health issues.
Although it may be tempting for parents or caregivers to not set limits and use devices to prevent
challenging behaviors, the health issues that can stem from it highlight the importance of established
boundaries to ensure that children can grow up without negative developmental impacts.
The first few years of life undoubtedly serve as the foundational building blocks for a child's
future. However, young children who have constant access to technology may face long-term effects that
could jeopardize their brains development. For kids under the age of five, engaging in two or more hours
of daily screen time; has made them “more likely to experience behavioral problems and have poorer
vocabulary acquisition” (Muppalla) These prolonged digital interactions often replace essential social
interactions that are crucial for the development of their social skills. A deficit in social interaction can
lead to difficulties in making friends and effective communication, potentially contributing to the
emergence of mental health issues. Mental disorders often manifest early in life, and the excessive use of
social media can be a contributing factor. Because “mental health trends […] in youth worsened during
the same period of time that teen smartphone and social media use increased” (The Jed Foundation), it
can be argued that social media is one of the root causes of poor mental health. While it is normal for us
to compare ourselves to other people, social comparisons on platforms like Instagram and TikTok have
led to feelings of inadequacy in children as young as middle schoolers. Social media often portrays
unrealistic versions of people and their lives, creating social standards that young people strive toward.
Constant exposure to people that may look more attractive, be thinner, more successful, or have
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higher-income than others can cause people, especially young ones, to feel that they don’t measure up to
expectations and standards set by others. While earlier generations dealt with comparable problems, the
ever-present and instantly accessible nature of social media has only worsened the issue and forced these
comparisons directly into the lives of youth in ways that past generations did not encounter. This
underscores the importance of prioritizing young children's well-being by guiding them toward balanced
childhoods that are not influenced by the media.
The impact of technology on different generations is becoming increasingly evident. For instance,
today's teenagers exhibit shorter attention spans, whose decline is primarily attributed to the influence of
screens in our daily lives, offering countless distractions that can foster addictive behavior, especially
among young people. While “50 percent of individuals aged 18–29 report that they are online almost
constantly, only 8 percent of those aged 65 and older report this level of use.” (Cotten) Compared to
previous ones, younger generations are experiencing a change since they have grown up immersed in
screen-based experiences rather than real-world ones. This new upbringing has formed a reliance on
technology that other generations do not experience. Instant reward, never-ending entertainment, and an
endless supply of information are all accessible through the internet, which provides the escape, feeding
the addiction that so many people experience. Screen addiction in turn also affects how much sleep people
get, because of how hard they are to put down. Sleep is a critical factor for brain development and overall
health, but the increased use of devices before bedtime disrupts natural rhythms. A human’s circadian
rhythm is like an internal clock which is kept in check by the sun's cycle. Our bodies have evolved to
know that when the sun goes down to produce melatonin in order to slow down internal processes,
allowing you to sleep and store your experiences into memory. In 2006 45% of kids reported not sleeping
a full eight hours a night, 17 years later in 2023, “77% of adolescents reported having sleep
problems”(Hale) Blue light emitted from devices is the cause for this. Being on your phone before going
to sleep limits the amount of melatonin produced in your body, which in turn affects how quickly and how
long you will fall asleep for. Sleep deprivation limits the brain's ability to process and develop
information, as well as repair and build muscles, bones, tissues, and the release of the growth hormone. It
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is important to set healthy sleep and screen habits during childhood to set them up for successful and
healthy lifestyles.
Some may believe that when you limit your child’s screen time that they will never learn self
control. For children, “technology is a huge source of learning, entertainment, and distraction at the same
time”(Singh), the effects of which depend solely on how you use it. Learning to set boundaries is a crucial
lifestyle and children need guidance and opportunities to practice it. Kids lack the same levels of
self-regulation and time management skills as adults, adding the addictive allure of screens on top of that
makes it a challenge for kids to disengage. Without external limits set by parents or caregivers, children
are likely to neglect other aspects of their lives. Creating an unhealthy balance of the digital world and the
physical one. In addition to restraining from setting boundaries, many parents use devices to reduce
children's negative behaviors. Although it is rewarding for both the child and the caregiver, "This […] can
motivate them both to maintain this cycle.” (Mostafovi) Using devices to distract kids and manage
difficult behavior creates a habit which strengthens over time as children and their parents get less
practice using other coping strategies. Oftentimes parenting is draining for adults who need to compensate
their children’s needs with their own, and many crave a break from it. Despite devices offering an easy
solution, it is important that children learn to cope without the aid of screens both to learn more about
themselves and their feelings. By gradually giving children more responsibility and allowing them to
make their own decisions about screen time and other aspects of their lives, they can learn to develop the
skills they need to set boundaries as they grow.
Even if technology offers convenient answers to common issues, such as a toddler's tantrums, it's
crucial to keep in mind that young children use these behaviors to express their feelings. The internet
poses many risks to young minds' health, so rather than dismissing problems with distractions, caregivers
should adopt the practice of communicating about behaviors and emotions. Since the newest generations
have been born into a technologically advanced and connected world unlike those who came before them,
it is crucial to protect young children early on to ensure proper growth and development, before it is too
late.
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Works Cited
Cotten, Shelia R. “Is Technology Use Leading to the Demise of Our Mental Health and Well-Being?”
American Sociological Association, 28 Nov. 2022,
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ng/.
Hale, Lauren, and Stanford Guan. “Screen Time and Sleep among School-Aged Children and
Adolescents: A Systematic Literature Review.” Sleep Medicine Reviews, W.B. Saunders, 12 Aug.
2014, www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S1087079214000811?via%3Dihub.
Mostafovi , Beata. “Frequently Using Digital Devices to Soothe Young Children May Backfire.” [Home],
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Muppalla, Sudheer Kumar, et al. “Effects of Excessive Screen Time on Child Development:
An Updated Review and Strategies for Management.” Cureus, U.S. National Library of
Medicine, 18 June 2023,
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%20increased,a%20young%20age%20%5B13%5D.
Singh, Ruby. “How Is Technology Affecting the Younger Generation in 2023.” Tech Baji, 10 July 2023,
techbaji.com/technology/technology-affecting-the-younger-generation/.
“Understanding Social Comparison on Social Media: Jed.” The Jed Foundation, 11 May 2023,
jedfoundation.org/resource/understanding-social-comparison-on-social-media/#:~:text=The%20te
ndency%20to%20compare%20ourselves,mental%20and%20emotional%20health%20impact.
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H Argument Essay Rubric
Skill Not Yet Foundational Proficient Advanced
Identifies a basic claim Appears in first Thesis establishes a
Thesis paragraph complex claim
Thesis establishes a Establishes
topic and a claim counter-argument in
claim
Topic sentences contain Topic sentences have Topic sentences have
Claims/Reasons basic claims clear and distinct clear and distinct
claims that relate to the claims that relate to the
thesis thesis and make
nuanced points that
consider alternate
perspectives or
counterarguments
Uses some brief Uses multiple pieces of Uses a variety of
Evidence examples, or one evidence (personal evidence (see previous
example, to support experience, anecdotes, column) that supports
each claim; may all be survey, research etc.) to each claim; different
personal experience support each claim types of evidence in
each body paragraph
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Use of reliable outside
sources
Brief explanation of Explains how evidence Provides strong
Analysis how evidence supports supports topic explanations of how
topic sentence of sentence/claim of evidence supports topic
individual paragraphs individual paragraphs sentence and the thesis
and the thesis while also considering
counterarguments
Includes at least 2
concessions in body Seamlessly mentions
paragraphs concession, and offers
response/rebuttal
Counter- Makes some mention of Structure Well-structured and
Argument opposing argument counter-argument effective
which: counter-argument
Mentions the opposing which:
argument, some Establishes an aspect of
mention of how the opposing argument,
opposing argument may clearly and logically
be disproven disproves the argument
Some elements missing Heading is correctly No errors in MLA format
MLA Format or some errors in MLA formatted
format
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Pages are numbered
In-text citations are
correctly formatted (if
sources are used)
Works Cited format:
hanging indent,
double-spaced,
alphabetized, starts on a
new page (if sources are
used)
Works Cited: each source
entry is in correct MLA
format (if sources are
used)
Shows evidence of basic Quotes are correctly Quotes are correctly
Conventions proofreading integrated most of the integrated
time (if sources are
used) Shows evidence of
careful proofreading
Follows essay
organization (claims in Includes fluid transitions
topic sentence; evidence; between ideas
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analysis; concluding
sentences) Eliminates wordiness
Shows evidence of
proofreading
Utilizes mostly simple Some varied sentence Consistently varied
Fluency sentence structures structures sentence structures
Some use of advanced Advanced use of
vocabulary vocabulary; including
use of active verbs